Prompt-Level Supervisory Alignment for Anticipatory Manuscript Revision

Researchers increasingly use large language models (LLMs) to revise manuscripts in response to peer reviews, yet this adoption is largely unprincipled and risks the ironies of automation. Prompt-Level Supervisory Alignment (PLSA) applies Supervisory Control Theory as a structured prompting strategy for LLM-assisted manuscript revision. We extend PLSA’s planning function to multi-round peer review, where the planner must anticipate concerns that later reviewers will raise. We construct RevPlan-Bench, a corpus of multi-round manuscripts whose ground truth is the issues expert reviewers raised across three or more review cycles, and score 23,256 revision plans spanning five information conditions, three LLM backbones, and four prompting variants. First-round reviews substantially improve coverage of future concerns; multi-agent debate degrades performance; and explicit anticipation prompting, our central pre-registered hypothesis, adds no practical value beyond the reviews themselves, an informative null. Information design is the dominant lever; the researcher remains the final arbiter of scholarly claims.